Saturday, June 30, 2007

She cried. That gut wrenching cry that leaves one gasping for breath. She didn’t even know why. The weather in fact was perfect. She looked great in the mirror. Her routine was undisturbed. Life wasn’t any worse than the day before. But then all of a sudden it flooded her thoughts and choked her senses.


Shubhojit said...

Releases the burden from ur heart. It helps if u can cry in solitude sometimes. Not everyone can.
Now u r a free bird with a lighter heart :)

Shreyasi Deb said...

I think it is the normal, usual routine which can be horribly painful at times

aren't we assuming things in talking to a 'you'?

Shubhojit said...

Shreyasi - I ofcourse did not mean the writer when I said 'u'. It was a more generalisation. But neway even if the 'u' meant the writer, being a free bird is always welcome :)

Rambler said...

It came out so well disguised, it seem to not affect anything, not even life.
But it did come out, back from the closed doors,
the thoughts seem to have developed a liking to it,
They do not want to let go,
Time can do wonders, but well not always,
So does memories, they cant be painful, not always
Crys, Smiles, Tears, Joy well whats fun in life without them.
Fun not always...
Not always.

DreamCatcher said...

SJ: Wise you are :)

SD: True. it can/is painful for sure.

Rambler: I am amazed. Thank you. This is beautiful.