Saturday, March 07, 2009


scared of being left alone

with the unspoken words

that hung between them

she fills her day with unending chores

the faintly bitter hairball of emotions

rising in her throat reminds her of

the emptiness he leaves behind every night

he walks away in her sleep

will she ever be ready to let him go?


Rambler said...

I loved the choice of title for this one, exhale, will we ever be able to do it

DreamCatcher said...

rambler: :)

Iti said...

"she fills her day with unending chores"

reminds me how I used to spend my time when all of a sudden I had no phone calls to wait for

nice :)

DreamCatcher said...

Iti: thanks for visiting!!

RustyNeurons said...

I lovvvvvvvved this line DC - "hairball of emotions
rising in her throat"

brilliantly crafted!!

Ekta said...

hmmm....if only letting go was as easy!

DreamCatcher said...

Rusty: you aren't writing enough girl...I check almost every day! Thanks for your comment...!

Ekta: sigh!